http://booksrgood4u.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] booksrgood4u.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ninedaysaqueen 2011-10-29 07:52 pm (UTC)

First of all, this was great! Sophos was adorable with his crush on Helen, his wanting to help Gen with his cousins, and his general all-around cuteness :)

And now you've got me intrigued as to what Relius has to do with this, and I'm still wondering what Irene's story is.....

I just noticed a few typos:

as if he'd just insult(ed) his mother

He hadn't been expected(expecting) an answer.


Sophos twiddled his thumps (thumbs)

Sorry, I just thought I'd let you know:)

Once again, it was great, and I look forward to future installments!

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